Peer+Editing+Rubric

 ||  Score  || Clear, well developed thesis Lays footing for evaluating the topic Answers the FULL question || Substantial amount of information Specific to thesis Develops thesis  For DBQ Effectively uses substantial amount of documents  Supports thesis with substantial and relevant outside information || Clearly relates to what question is asking Shows appropriate analysis (Cause and Effect, Change over time, etc) || Minor, do not detract from essay || Well organized and written || Partially evaluative Only answers part of question || Some relevance to thesis Supports thesis  <span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial','sans-serif'">For DBQ <span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial','sans-serif'">Effectively uses some documents <span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial','sans-serif'"> <span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial','sans-serif'">Supports thesis with some outside information || <span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial','sans-serif'">Some analysis Substantially uneven treatment of multiple topics* || <span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial','sans-serif'">Can have more serious errors as long as they don't detract from the essay || <span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial','sans-serif'">Acceptable || <span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial','sans-serif'">Restates the question as the thesis Confused and undeveloped thesis || <span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial','sans-serif'">Lists facts no application to thesis <span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial','sans-serif'"> <span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial','sans-serif'">For DBQ <span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial','sans-serif'">Uses documents by only paraphrasing, quoting, or briefly citing <span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial','sans-serif'"> <span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial','sans-serif'">Little, or irrelevant, outside information || <span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial','sans-serif'">non-specific analysis Does not link info to question || <span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial','sans-serif'">major || <span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial','sans-serif'">May be poorly written and organized || <span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial','sans-serif'">No thesis or simply paraphrased question || <span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial','sans-serif'">Incompetent or inappropriate <span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial','sans-serif'"> <span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial','sans-serif'">For DBQ <span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial','sans-serif'">Little or no understanding of the documents || <span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial','sans-serif'">None || <span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial','sans-serif'">Substantial || <span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial','sans-serif'">Is written and organized poorly ||
 * || ===<span style="FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial','sans-serif'">APUSH Peer Editing Rubric === ||
 * <span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial','sans-serif'">Thesis ** ||
 * <span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial','sans-serif'">Information ** ||
 * <span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial','sans-serif'">Analysis ** ||
 * <span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial','sans-serif'">Errors ** ||
 * <span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial','sans-serif'">Style ** ||
 * <span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial','sans-serif'">8-9 ** ||
 * <span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial','sans-serif'">8-9 ** ||
 * <span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial','sans-serif'">5-7 ** ||
 * <span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial','sans-serif'">5-7 ** ||
 * <span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial','sans-serif'">2-4 ** ||
 * <span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial','sans-serif'">2-4 ** ||
 * <span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial','sans-serif'">0-1 ** ||
 * <span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial','sans-serif'">0-1 ** ||